Flat Plan Feedback

Aishah:
'I think that you flat plan has a good structure and I like the way the title of the magazine looks. I think you could improve it by adding some more images maybe.'

Hannah:
'I really like how the artists name is big and bold. And the same goes for the masthead because you can immediately see that it's a pop magazine. You could improve it by adding some more features to the double page spread as it is much more simpler compared to the other two.'

Sanaya:
'I think that the structure is good on all of them however, I personally like the contents page more because there are so many interesting features on it. You could improve it by filling in any blank spaces with text or images.